December 12, 2010
I love you but I dont want you to know
no I cant let my love show
what if you dont like me for me
walls are safe but I want to be free
I wish you knew how much I care
I wish I could say ill always be there
when you struggle when you fall
Id be there if youd only call
but I cant come on my own
im afraid of leaving my safe dome
im afraid of rejection
im afraid of imperfection
I wish I could show you how much I care
I wish I could say Ill always be there
but see im not the best with words
im afraid thell be destroyed or misheard
I want you to know what you meen to me
I wish I could show all the help I could be
I can listen you can talk
we can go down the road and take a walk
I wish I could understand what you go through
the thing is I think I do

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falling10ssupernova said...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 7:23 pm
please comment i need feedback desperately  just be honest even if its not nice
sunray said...
Dec. 31, 2010 at 3:27 pm
in the begining i thought this poem stunk but i really like the ending good stuff
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