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Tumbling Deep

December 7, 2010
By Erin-Katherine Da;y SILVER, Ivoryton, Connecticut
Erin-Katherine Da;y SILVER, Ivoryton, Connecticut
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A steep incline below her feet.
The edgy rock is tumbling deep.
The birds above take a swoop,
As she tries not to move.
This drop is turned a downward way
As her ankles swerve and sway.
Then she gains balance again
And she keeps a level head.

Now she stands out by the shore
Waves push and pull her more and more
Head over heels she gets down and kneels
On the earth that slowly steals
Her balance from her feet
Her ankles swerve and sway
Then she gains balance again
And she keeps a level head.



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on Mar. 23 2011 at 2:18 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

You're welcome!!!  Keep up the great work!!!

on Mar. 22 2011 at 7:21 pm
Erin-Katherine Da;y SILVER, Ivoryton, Connecticut
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Thank You!

on Mar. 17 2011 at 3:25 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

This is phenomenal!!!  I love the figuarative language used throughout!!!