Lifetime

December 6, 2010
By Speak101 BRONZE, Cordova, Tennessee
Speak101 BRONZE, Cordova, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
" As of today i have made the decision to beat up all those that piss me off ( i have little tolerance ) ; therefore , keep your distance , of buy shin guards " : )


A room replete with gay faces
Dissolved into two


Hearts begin to vibrate
Emotions generated
The force field was drawing us closer
Like magnets

My eyes met the starlight sparkles of hers
Second guesses took a voyage in my mind
Should I
Is this a mistake
Will she love me back
Then the thoughts and the voice of doubt shattered like a cymbal

With one wet kiss
On the face
The gentle nudge of her paw
The brown fluffy ears confirmed
In my heart
I have now found
A lifetime friend


The author's comments:
I wanted to fool the readers into believing it was going to a completely different place. I wanted their mind to take a journey in every direction as they slowed down because they were almost at the end .

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on Dec. 29 2010 at 1:27 am
Speak101 BRONZE, Cordova, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
" As of today i have made the decision to beat up all those that piss me off ( i have little tolerance ) ; therefore , keep your distance , of buy shin guards " : )

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM . YOU SEEM TO MAKE A TWIST . IT WAS VERY CREATIVE AND JUST LOVELY


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