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"Relationships"

Holding hands was all we did…
But now it’s all we never do…
Once you held me up…
But now you’ve let me down…
I still love you…
But I know it’s unrequited…
The pain you’ve made me feel before…
Is nothing like what I feel now…
I once was happy…
Like a child playing ball…
But now I am not…
I am now like the night sky…
Dark, quiet, and beautiful…
Waiting silently for dawn to come…
The time when people stir…
Become alive and breathe their first breath…
The beginning of all their struggles…



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HaleyS. said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 2:50 pm:
This is Deep! It's good that u can write something that seems real and u never went through it. =u hav skillz
 
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HelloLove37 said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 9:34 am:
This was amazing. I love your work you post on here. Keep it up(:
 
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ChimeraXoxo said...
Dec. 29, 2010 at 12:36 pm:
I hope it was just a project for english and you didnt have to experience this first hand, but from the first line to the last, i found it to be amazing, keep it up :)
 
the_recreational_spiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 11:38 am :

no i havent felt that yet  and i hope i never do

thanks for the comment  maybe you can look at some  of my other works

 
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silent_reader said...
Dec. 28, 2010 at 3:15 pm:
You deserved the 100% :)
 
forgottenangel replied...
Dec. 28, 2010 at 7:45 pm :
I agree it's totally amazing!!
 
the_recreational_spiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 11:37 am :

thank you  for the comments   maybe you can look at my other works

it would be much appreciated

 
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zhlen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 27, 2010 at 12:47 pm:
I like it.. pleaz check our my works too. One of them is sorta similar to yours.
 
the_recreational_spiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 11:39 am :
thanks for the comment i will look at some of your other works in the hope that you willl look at some of mine  :)
 
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