"Relationships"

December 6, 2010
By the_recreational_spirit GOLD, Halifax, Other
the_recreational_spirit GOLD, Halifax, Other
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Favorite Quote:
look at life with every angle
because the angle that you miss could be the one that changes your life


Holding hands was all we did…
But now it’s all we never do…
Once you held me up…
But now you’ve let me down…
I still love you…
But I know it’s unrequited…
The pain you’ve made me feel before…
Is nothing like what I feel now…
I once was happy…
Like a child playing ball…
But now I am not…
I am now like the night sky…
Dark, quiet, and beautiful…
Waiting silently for dawn to come…
The time when people stir…
Become alive and breathe their first breath…
The beginning of all their struggles…

The author's comments:
a poem for a project in english that i got 100% on. :)
Unrequited means when you love someone but they don't love you back.

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HaleyS. GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 2:50 pm
HaleyS. GOLD, Byram, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If you drown, at least die knowing you were headed for the shore.
-Ray Bradbury

This is Deep! It's good that u can write something that seems real and u never went through it. =u hav skillz

on Jan. 19 2011 at 9:34 am
HelloLove37 BRONZE, Wyoming, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Dance like nobody's watching, love like you'll never get hurt, live like its heaven on earth."

This was amazing. I love your work you post on here. Keep it up(:

on Jan. 18 2011 at 11:39 am
the_recreational_spirit GOLD, Halifax, Other
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Favorite Quote:
look at life with every angle
because the angle that you miss could be the one that changes your life

thanks for the comment i will look at some of your other works in the hope that you willl look at some of mine  :)

on Jan. 18 2011 at 11:38 am
the_recreational_spirit GOLD, Halifax, Other
18 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
look at life with every angle
because the angle that you miss could be the one that changes your life

no i havent felt that yet  and i hope i never do

thanks for the comment  maybe you can look at some  of my other works


on Jan. 18 2011 at 11:37 am
the_recreational_spirit GOLD, Halifax, Other
18 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
look at life with every angle
because the angle that you miss could be the one that changes your life

thank you  for the comments   maybe you can look at my other works

it would be much appreciated


on Dec. 29 2010 at 12:36 pm
abcdefghijkkkkk SILVER, Stamford, Connecticut
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I hope it was just a project for english and you didnt have to experience this first hand, but from the first line to the last, i found it to be amazing, keep it up :)

on Dec. 28 2010 at 7:45 pm
forgottenangel SILVER, Dearborn, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is Golden"

I agree it's totally amazing!!

on Dec. 28 2010 at 3:15 pm
silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I cannot live without books." - Thomas Jefferson

You deserved the 100% :)

asofnow GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2010 at 12:47 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

I like it.. pleaz check our my works too. One of them is sorta similar to yours.




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