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A Perfect World

I close my eyes, inhale, and bask in the aroma of fresh spices.
Gain composition. Find tranquility.
I submerge myself in serenity.
Calm. Sweet. Silence.
Silence to retreat, from the negativity.

Grip the brush and stain my feelings on the white canvas.
In this world imagination sparks creation.
Expressing thoughts not with words, but through brushstrokes.
Setting the mood with shades of red and deep purples.
Manifesting vast fields of tulips and lavender
Using exotic colors to display city nightlife.
Where
In this world originality is your way of passage
No one is denied the right to show their true colors in this perfect world.




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HaleyS. said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 2:54 pm:
Super good. i lv to paint too and i feel like that. i cud read this several times!
 
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ChimeraXoxo said...
Dec. 29, 2010 at 12:28 pm:
Very nice phrases/words used, i love it, keep it up :)
 
distractingashh replied...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 10:05 pm :
Thank you very much! :)
 
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nickykensThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 27, 2010 at 12:33 pm:
Vivid.  Very good.
 
distractingashh replied...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 10:05 pm :
Thank you! :)
 
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