When we become one

December 1, 2010
By stubborn411 GOLD, Jamiaca, New York
stubborn411 GOLD, Jamiaca, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing is impossible, just highly improbable


we become one

not through the touch of our lips

or the tickles of your hands

we become one

not by you softly whispered words

or gentle caressing touch

we become one

not through out treasured secret kisses

and our 'don't leave me' hugs

we become one when you hold in your arms

and lift my chin, whisper 'i love you' and and take it from then

the other moments are nice

don't get me wrong

but they are just a few notes to our love song

we become one when I feel your arms

and those words only from you

then we can do whatever you want to do



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on Jan. 4 2011 at 12:53 am
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
dream as if you'll live forever
live as if you'll die tomorrow

should it be "hold me in your arms"? are "take it from there"? either way this is sweet and true :)

on Jan. 2 2011 at 10:57 pm
stubborn411 GOLD, Jamiaca, New York
13 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing is impossible, just highly improbable

Thank you so much

on Jan. 2 2011 at 9:37 pm
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If you don't leap you'lll never know what it's like to fly"

I like the ending! It's really good and you have an excellent word choice!!


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