When we become one

December 1, 2010
we become one

not through the touch of our lips

or the tickles of your hands

we become one

not by you softly whispered words

or gentle caressing touch

we become one

not through out treasured secret kisses

and our 'don't leave me' hugs

we become one when you hold in your arms

and lift my chin, whisper 'i love you' and and take it from then

the other moments are nice

don't get me wrong

but they are just a few notes to our love song

we become one when I feel your arms

and those words only from you

then we can do whatever you want to do





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OriginalCarbonation said...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 12:53 am
should it be "hold me in your arms"? are "take it from there"? either way this is sweet and true :)
 
Mgymnast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 2, 2011 at 9:37 pm
I like the ending! It's really good and you have an excellent word choice!!
 
stubborn411 replied...
Jan. 2, 2011 at 10:57 pm
Thank you so much
 
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