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What happens when the bright path
You’ve been walking
Suddenly isn't there
All that’s left is the sunspots blinding you
Leaving you with no sight
Helpless

What happens when the thundering instructions
You’ve been receiving
Disappears
All that’s left is the roaring in your ears
Leaving you deaf
No sounds to interpret

What happens when the voice in your head
That you’ve been hearing
Vanishes
All that’s left is what you’ve done
Leaving you desolate
Nothing left

What happens when you find out its only you?
Your all alone
By yourself
All that’s left is your doubts
Your thoughts
Your fears

What happens then?
What happens when there's nothing left but you?
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cheetoz45680 said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 9:45 pm:
woah dude YOU'RE the one that's AMAZING. i reallly really like this one....it's awesome
 
cheetoz45680 replied...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 10:10 pm :
so i read your poems and decided this one's my favorite :) you're awesome
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 4:59 pm :
this is just polished... all my work gets rated in my head and this is one im maybe going to publish later on.
 
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Phoenixx said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 8:53 pm:
I absoloutly love this! Theres a bit of a depressing edge to it, but it compliments the points that you trying to get across, ts like a perfect harmony, but a poem! :D
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 4:20 pm :
thanks, i love to hear things like that. and the depressing edge was me being honest
 
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HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoul This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 11:59 pm:

Brilliant.

I'm not religious, but I can appreciate how you feel.
I sincerely hope you find your own truth, whatever it may be.

And while I'm here, thank you very much for reading my poems & commenting. It means a lot. :)

 
miracles_change_people replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 7:21 pm :

well i wouldnt say im religous exactly but i find solace in god so.....

 

and thanks for the comments

 
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