what happens then

December 1, 2010
By secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff


What happens when the bright path
You’ve been walking
Suddenly isn't there
All that’s left is the sunspots blinding you
Leaving you with no sight
Helpless

What happens when the thundering instructions
You’ve been receiving
Disappears
All that’s left is the roaring in your ears
Leaving you deaf
No sounds to interpret

What happens when the voice in your head
That you’ve been hearing
Vanishes
All that’s left is what you’ve done
Leaving you desolate
Nothing left

What happens when you find out its only you?
Your all alone
By yourself
All that’s left is your doubts
Your thoughts
Your fears

What happens then?
What happens when there's nothing left but you?
............


The author's comments:
im a christian and i was questioning the world still am in fact

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on Aug. 14 2011 at 4:59 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

this is just polished... all my work gets rated in my head and this is one im maybe going to publish later on.

on Aug. 11 2011 at 10:10 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
88 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Pain is inevitable, suffering is optional.

so i read your poems and decided this one's my favorite :) you're awesome

on Aug. 11 2011 at 9:45 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
88 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Pain is inevitable, suffering is optional.

woah dude YOU'RE the one that's AMAZING. i reallly really like this one....it's awesome

on Aug. 3 2011 at 4:20 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

thanks, i love to hear things like that. and the depressing edge was me being honest

Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:53 pm
Phoenixx GOLD, Toronto, Other
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I absoloutly love this! Theres a bit of a depressing edge to it, but it compliments the points that you trying to get across, ts like a perfect harmony, but a poem! :D

on Jul. 7 2011 at 7:21 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

well i wouldnt say im religous exactly but i find solace in god so.....

 

and thanks for the comments


on Jul. 6 2011 at 11:59 pm
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
79 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

Brilliant.

I'm not religious, but I can appreciate how you feel.
I sincerely hope you find your own truth, whatever it may be.

And while I'm here, thank you very much for reading my poems & commenting. It means a lot. :)



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