Afraid

December 1, 2010
By Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
14 articles 0 photos 82 comments

I'm afraid of the truth that haunts my present state.
I'm afraid of sharing my true feelings.
Afraid that once I speak the truth everyone that loves me will evaporate.
Afraid that I'll be all alone to face my demons inside me.
I'm afraid to be alone.
Afraid that I'll think to much.
Afraid that I'll take my life into and even more silent world.
I'm afraid there's not enough time for everyone, for everything.
I'm afraid to be alone for I will hear the silents inside me.


The author's comments:
This peace of work was inspired by the silents I heard. I hate being alone and facing the true deep feelings of silents. Have YOU ever got afraid of the silence?

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on Jul. 6 2012 at 7:13 am
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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Yeah I just noticed that but I have a problem with skipping letters in words or plain out mispelling. But that happens because the only time I write is when I cant handle something or need a "let-out". And thank you for your feed back I think I'll go through poems before I post so people will understand it more. :)

on Jul. 1 2012 at 2:39 pm
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

Once again, I can feel your passion behind the words. I particularly like the line:

"I'm afraid there's not enough time for everyone, for everything."

It's so very honest and makes me wonder myself.

And, like last time, a few lines aren't crafted with the best English, but still lovely :)


on Apr. 7 2011 at 10:32 am
ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
39 articles 2 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take life to seriously, nobody makes it out alive anyways"-Unknown

I liked it but I noticed a few mistakes in there so please don't mind my slightly constructive critiscm. So the last line is basically the only thing that bugged me shouldn't it be, "...I will here the *silence* inside me"? just throwing that out there but it's your poem and ultimately with you yourself being the author you get to make the decisions on whether or not to change it. But I did really like it because it's relatable and people understand what you're talking about. Keep Writing! (:

on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:12 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

sometimes silence is the scariest thing ever.

on Jan. 17 2011 at 11:35 am
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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aww thanks :)

on Jan. 17 2011 at 11:04 am
Zombie_Girl SILVER, Eastlake, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“I have heard there are troubles of more than one kind. Some come from ahead and some come from behind. But I've bought a big bat. I'm all ready you see. Now my troubles are going to have troubles with me!”

-Dr. Seuss

Pretty really good :)


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