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Gone is the Rain

You're gone, but I
Still feel you here.
You are a soft
spoken melody
whispering in my ear.

The rain drops hitting
your skin, are the tears
that I have cried.
As you walk alone,
silently tonight.

What happened,
to the love in your heart?
Where is the umbrella
now that we are apart?

I will stay alone tonight
listening to the rain
as we go our own ways.

I guess our love was never
meant to remain.

Gone you are.
Gone with the rain.
You left without a word,
nor a sound.

Where ever we may go
there will always be one
thing I will know.

The day the last
little drop
falls to the earth,
is the day that I will
forget you.





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hancampbell said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 7:26 pm
This is so amazing! I love the ending, it's so hauntingly beautiful. Thanks for commenting mine! Sorry for taking a while to respond; I haven't been online in a few days. (:
 
Katie16 said...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 6:09 pm

Okay first of all, I love how I am the first to comment. I really love this poem, it's so good. I love the way you wrote it too. I don't know if you know though, a stanza is only 4 lines though. :)

 

Again, it's amazing and I love it. :)

 
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