Double Back

November 28, 2010
By TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
227 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Anything said by Mr. T
- Ill be in my bunk
- Im so clever that half the time I don't even understand what I'm saying

when you leave me alone
my mind doubles back on itself
everything matters more
so much more
too much more
I look back on the words
the ones I wrote
and I think
I was falling apart
you were ripping me
till my stuffing started falling out
but then
nothing is fixed
but every drop of pain I didn't cry
every silent scream
seems so unnecessary
such a waste of
and time
but I know
I will feel the same again
and you will tug at my seams
until my newly sewn edges
start to rip again
but for now
I will enjoy your
and revel in my
before it doubles back

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on Dec. 26 2010 at 8:52 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

I like the ending a lot, where you say "non-hate" and "non-insanity" instead of love and sanity.

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