The Other Girl

November 16, 2010
I'm the other girl
the undesirable one
the one no one truly considers
for her worth
I'm the other girl
the one who isn't perfect
the one who talks to her cat at night
instead of you
I'm the other girl
the one who french braids the grass in the yard
and writes your name in the sand
before the waves whisk it away
I'm the other girl
the one you will forget





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Ducttape.isnt.tear.proof said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 12:11 am
Its like your writing about my life :)
 
Shadowrider said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 4:21 pm

I agree with ErisRose I can totally relate and you are an amazing writer!

 

 
darkangle56 said...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 2:38 pm
I love it <3
 
YoungSuperman said...
Dec. 31, 2010 at 4:37 pm
Keep writing this is very good
 
ErisRose said...
Dec. 29, 2010 at 12:17 pm
I loved this poem and i can so relate to this. Keep writing!
 
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