somewhere in this darkness

November 28, 2010
Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Rain falls down; I’m all alone, in the middle of a nowhere.

Mascara runs down my face cascading into intricate webs of black.

Where is my knight? Coming from the intense dark that is slowly engulfing me

as I melt into the trees that are as ancient as time itself.

How did it come to this, everything that was so perfect is now not,

all of it is pointless, and terrifying, as I cry and sob in the epic cold.

My only hope is the dawn of the new day and the light that it will surely bring.

For if it doesn’t, I am truly afraid that I may be forever consumed

in this awful world of desolation and misery. So until that time I will stay as I am,

hoping, wishing, praying for the light as I am slowly corrupted by the evils of this dark.

Join the Discussion

This article has 3 comments. Post your own now!

AnonymousOne said...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 11:08 pm

I interpreted as something catastrophically awful happened and she just doesn't know if time will heal it.


I liked it, and also how u asked for us to interpret it. That's how a poem should be looked at, not just one way.


Take a look at mine? They are pending right now, though. thanks!

forget_me_not said...
Dec. 26, 2010 at 1:31 pm
very intense and passionate. beautiful
Symphony_24 replied...
Dec. 31, 2010 at 2:48 am
thank you :) i dont know why the lines are so far apart i didnt do that on purpose lol  but thanks :)
Site Feedback