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The Big white door

December 16, 2010
By iluvwritting BRONZE, Ny, New York
iluvwritting BRONZE, Ny, New York
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Favorite Quote:
" Don't search for love,Let love search for you"


There was a field covered with beautiful flowers….
And a river that flows gently between the field,
And a big colorful tree…
On the tree there was a giant white door, that is full of wonder, hope, love, and joy…
This door will lead you to go to your wildest dreams…
This door will lead you to nowhere but some place wonderful where no bad ever happens…
It has been said that there will be no worry, no sadness, no sign of misery, or loneliness…
It has been said that not everyone gets go in the wonderful place, behind that colorful tree…
The river floated gently, with its light blue color, that makes you feel peaceful just looking at it…
But this river was dangerous...
No one would ever think of going near it…
Your job is to get through the field of flowers,
Cross that river without being pulled down,
And make it to that door…
The only thing that can stop you when you’re swimming in the river,
To get to that door is yourself…
It depends how you think of yourself…
If your upset, and always put yourself down…
It depends how miserable you have made yourself…
No matter what time of problem you are in…
You basically go through what I call the (The Big White Door)…
When you’re walking through that field of flower you should be happy and excited…
(You have nothing to worry about; but the problems haven’t come yet…)
Then as you walked things starts to get tough…
It seems that the faster you run, the further the door gets…
Now it depends if you have hope…
If you keep on believing that you’ll get there, then you will…
But some people give up…
And there chances are over…
The people that kept running had hope, and eventually succeeded….
Things start to get tough…
The next thing you know there are traps…
A rope will be wrapped around your right foot…
You would struggle and fight for you freedom…
(You start to have some problems in your life, but you fight to solve them)
If you’re someone that is weak, and always never try to solve your problems,
It will never get better…
That rope won’t get off your foot, until you try to unwrap it…
(Your problems won’t go away until you do something about it)
You have made it, all because you had courage, hope and bravery…
Now it’s time to swim across the river to get to that wonderful place…
The river is basically like a test…
If you are guilty of something, or miserable, or been suffering
Because of something, you sink down…
The river is giving you a test…
If you give up on yourself you will drown…
And hope will no longer be on your side…
If you’re brave and believe that you’re going to make it through…
You will have no problem swimming on the river…
(Believe that you can make it through your problems)
You have swam across the river,
And made it…
Now the big wonderful stories you head about the wonderful place.
(The advices people gave you, to try to solve your personal problem, has help you in so many
Ways, know you here to prove that they actually work…)
Your standing there staring at it…
One moment you were struggling for a while because of you problems,
The next minute you find yourself being free and ready to enter a new life…
You have learned from all of that and hopefully you’ll become a better person…
You enter into a better life,
And leaving the problems behind you because you have found a way to solve them…
As for the rest that have gave up, their problems will never be solved,
Because they never tried to solve it…
You turned around one more time remembering what you learned…
But all you see is the beautiful flower shinning like the first time you saw them,
But you know what will be holding you back…
The river looking so peaceful, but you know it’s dangerous…
Ready to test another person and see if they will pass the test…
To see if they will be following you inside that wonderful place…


The author's comments:
this is basically telling you that if you don't solve your problem's it will always follow you around.....

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