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Walking through the darkness,
The sky as black as coal.
The still and eerie silence
Slowly penetrates my soul.
I take in the scene around me;
All life has taken flight.
My eyes cannot discern anything
From the darkness of the night.
I stumble through the dismal field,
Hardly knowing where to step.
I’m envisioning my savior,
But I haven’t seen them yet.
Shifting feet from left to right,
My hope is slowly dwindling.
The world has no more use for me,
A small and ignorant weakling.
But, if my eyes do deceive me,
The universe ponders my silent plea.
Before my eyes appears a sight,
The world engulfed in brilliant light.





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victoria101 said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 6:03 pm
maddy this is awesome.....well everything u do is awesome :D ......i no the author
 
wirianta said...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 3:52 am
Maddy, this is beautiful and very well written. We're so proud of you!
 
Auntie V said...
Dec. 27, 2010 at 1:39 pm
Very impressive Maddy. Keep on writing:)
 
G and G said...
Dec. 22, 2010 at 11:14 am

 

Very thoughtful

Beautiful prose

You are  truly gifted 

 
sameens said...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 7:07 pm
THIS IS AWESOME! I LOVE IT I TOLD U THAT U WERE GOOD AT WRITING :D
 
maddyd replied...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 6:57 am
thanks sameen :D
 
sameens replied...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 8:47 am

welcome 


wow 


 

hahahahahahahahha

 
Booksrawesome said...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 10:01 am
Maddy that is sooo awesome <3 that poem is very deep and it sent shivers down my back... the good shivers hahaha lol :) anyway i am so glad that you got published- popo outt :) PS i was the first to comment :)
 
maddy d replied...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 10:23 am

thanks amanda :D

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