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Love!?!?

December 7, 2010
By ashley-llorens SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
ashley-llorens SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game!"


Love ain’t a typical story.
It’s not what they show in the movies.
Love makes ya proud,
Just to bring ya down.
For some odd reason people keep coming around.
To experience, this love
Love; what does it even truly mean.
Impossible feeling no one has ever seen.
Wait, can it even be seen
Or is it just a feeling between two hearts
No! Wrong again; I think…
Most of the time doesn’t someone cheat.
I’m not really the one to judge love
Considering I never experienced it, not once.
Well, I’ve seen it come and go;
One day they love.
Next day, that wasn’t enough.
What!? I thought love conquered all.
Guess not! Oh well. Soon again you’ll fall.
This whole story will play again;
This love!
Please don’t ask for my advice…
One thing I learned is love’s a sacrifice
One more thing I forgot to mention.
Probably should of started this poem with this sentence;
Well, here goes…
This is reality…And
Love…Don’t…Last…Here!

The author's comments:
originally written; 10/29/10.
I really believe everyone can relate to this because who really knows what love is.

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Afroman said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 8:32 pm
No love here, por que no senorita?

on Dec. 20 2010 at 2:46 am
M.Martinez SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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imaa waitinq=]

on Dec. 18 2010 at 7:29 pm
ashley-llorens SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game!"

thanks! :DDD I got more coming. <3 

on Dec. 17 2010 at 8:25 pm
M.Martinez SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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That's my girl! lovee this poem 7and a half starrs haha love it