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Future Love

By , essex fells, NJ
Couple of years and I am going to know your name
I been waiting for you forever and I know it might seem insane
But it wouldn’t be long
This is Future love

You are so far away
At the same time you are close
I can’t stop thinking about you,
I can’t even stop picture your face
I know it’s something worth waiting for.
I would put others behind me

Because I know that I am deeply in love with you
Like I never felt this way with others
You make everything better in the world
There is just something about the way you’ll love me.
I can’t even explain.
Its Future Love

I’ll will miss everything about you
I’ll miss how you hold my hand
How you would kiss me softly with your lips.
it’s just something about how you’ll love me.





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BrokenByTheLies,DeepInsideSheCries.. said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 8:19 am

You do realize that half of the lyrics right fully belong to Varsity Fanclub, right?

Half of this isn't even her work! I don't understand why she would take the lyrics from the band.. Wow..

 
jerseeyxgirx21 replied...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 10:47 am
i didn't take any words from that song and i don't even know who that is 
 
TaleGate said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 9:59 pm
Well, I love the idea behind this. :3 But I would suggest paying more attention to grammar and such in your piece. Also maybe you could be more consistant with future pieces with the rhyming, if you are going to rhyme. Keep writing, though. You have lots of potential, I can see. :) I especially loved how you started the poem. Keep it up!
 
Shylynn said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 10:11 am

iLove et!

you a good writer.

 
iluvwritting said...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 5:28 pm
very nice..one suggestion when you start to rhyme in the biggening you should end with rhyming...but other than that ..very nicely done...
 
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