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I made her this way
The rude remarks and repetitive swearing
Her usual facade of
Not caring, no apologies
And it is my fault

Her heart has frozen over
A fear for a while
But I know there has to be a reason
There is a fear she also has
And that is my fault

I wish I could go back
But doesn't everyone?
Erase my many selfish mistakes
Take back my coldness
Because it is my fault

I have realized the reason now
For I used to be he cold-hearted one
She looked up to me and watched carefully
And that is exactly why
It is all my fault



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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 8:34 pm:
freakin' awesome. "a fear for a while"-thats my fav. line. it sounds profound, like you just came out of college with brand new scar tactics and you're secretly taking over the world.do your dance.
 
QuiltCocoon replied...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 2:47 pm :
It makes me homesick and sad for a little sister I never had. Ha. That rhymed. But seriously, I love it :)
 
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SaMiLoVe97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 9:21 am:
Wow. I really like this peice(: keep writin'(:
 
WriteON replied...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 5:33 pm :
Thanks so much! :)
 
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