Freedom

December 12, 2010
When I die, I don't want to be remembered as the person I was, but as the person I am.
The person who is free from the world, free of all the judgment and pain.
The person who made it through the world and can still love, laugh, and forgive.





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ellie315 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 10:41 pm
The last piece doesn't fit, and it kind of makes the poem cliche. But as a writer myself, I see the amazing value of the first two parts. :) This is great!
 
drowning-in-sorrow said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 7:09 pm
this is amazing!
 
poetrydiva93 said...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 12:14 pm
Great job,i agree a hundred percent!
 
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