When I feel

November 27, 2010
By Anonymous

When the weepin' willow wind blows out you get shut out

The doors of opportunity closes
the dog barks and the baby cries

All you love is lost but yet you don't notice.

You only see darkness,but light is really there this depression hit like a baseball bat to a a baseball.But you don't care.

You hear the faint sound of laughter,but silence soon washes over the happiness

You can't understand it but it all makes clear sense
Your dieing inside like a wilting rose.

The author's comments:
I thought of a women so depressed and sad that had no love to represent her.Laughter and the sound of joy is really there but she can't see it, because she's so depressed.I hope people can get a inspiration from this poem to encourage them to be happy and outgoing and have fun with life

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Sarah_ GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 8:08 pm
Sarah_ GOLD, Decatur, Tennessee
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