Glass Barrier

November 26, 2010
By acc13a GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
acc13a GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
12 articles 3 photos 20 comments

My memory is becoming foggier,
the harder I try to remember.
Like I’m breathing on a mirror,
trying to get close to my reflection
but only achieve on breathing
white clouds
onto my own face
on the other side of the
Glass Barrier
that keeps
Memories
separate
from life.
Have I lost sight
Of where I’m going?
Or just lost
Where I want to be?



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acc13a GOLD said...
on Dec. 23 2010 at 5:07 pm
acc13a GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
12 articles 3 photos 20 comments
thanks(: it really means a lot

Marley11 said...
on Dec. 23 2010 at 1:40 pm
Marley11, Little Whinging, Other
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Definately don't lose confidence in your self. I agree about the whole imagery thing, plus it's deep and brings up points that i think are valid in almost everyone's life.

acc13a GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 5:53 pm
acc13a GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
12 articles 3 photos 20 comments
i really appreciate your comment, seeing as you're the first one to ever comment on my work. so thanks(: i was starting to lose confidence in myself.

on Dec. 13 2010 at 4:20 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

The imagery in this is so... intense; I suppose that's the word I'm looking for, but it still seems lacking.

I can see the poem, does that make sense?

I really can't belive no one else has commented on this by now...





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