Roses Fade Away.

November 26, 2010
I used to be a red rose,
all happy and free.
But now I am a black rose,
misunderstood and dying slowly.





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Marley11 said...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 1:41 pm
For a sixth grade poem it's really good. But I think if maybe you added a little more to the poem you could have a beyond amazing poem.
 
peaceeloveemusic replied...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 2:46 pm
Thanks. & I never really added to it because all we could have was four lines in order to turn it in to my teacher.
 
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