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November 26, 2010
By brilove BRONZE, Clovis, California
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"you know when you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams"- dr. suess
"the best thing about a picture is that it never changes, even when the people in it do"- andy warhol

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let it out, let it speak, is my independence shattering over me. a single moment, a hint of relief, breath sparrow breath, fly back to me. open dictionary fallow through cellar doors just to see words written. smile my simple little lyric, simple insperation, words grew, time short. a blunt crime in black and white, words speak for themslves, pillows buried underneath the sheets, you've gotta countdown to see me.

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while writing this alot was going on in my head, me, people i know, my future, and each line in this piece stands and represents somthing that invloves my feelings and outlooks on certin things.
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