Noise

By , Mexia, TX
From this silence I wish to be set free!
A silence so loud it bombards me.
A silence so great that I can’t breathe.
A silence so thick that I can’t see,
Because in this silence all I can do is think.
From this silence so bright, watering eyes blink.
This silence so thick that I can’t see.
This silence so great that…I can’t breathe!
This silence so loud it bombards me.
From this silence I wish to be set free!





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hepburn said...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 3:38 am
wow. i think this is one of my favorites by you... congrats :)
 
alanacarlene replied...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 2:59 pm
Thanks so much! That means a lot to me!!! Have you posted anything new???
 
hepburn replied...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 11:28 pm
i've tried posting new artwork but it still hasnt gotten approved :( takes forever......
 
alanacarlene replied...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 3:04 pm
Awww dang cause I've been waiting and checking every now and then lol your 3 Perspective pieces are still my favorite!!!
 
hepburn replied...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 4:06 am
Thanks :D But the new pieces i've been trying to post arent pencil this time, i've been working a little more on photographs recently.
 
alanacarlene replied...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 3:56 pm
Really?! Well I can't wait to see them! What types of pics?
 
hepburn replied...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 7:19 pm
Photoshoped. Not crazy or anything, but mostly night pictures in Shanghai. Oh and there's one drawing that i scanned and then colored in. You'll see soon enough ;)
 
alanacarlene replied...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 3:20 pm
Yay! I'm excited to see them! I bet the photos of Shanghai are beautiful!
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 12:42 pm
I love your quote - I hate being without my music! When I'm listening to something, I can just focus on the words, imagine and fantasize about how I wish things were instead of face reality. Silence screams too honestly and loudly.
 
alanacarlene replied...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 5:25 pm
"Silence screams too honest and loudly." Truer words have never been spoken! That's my new favorite quote lol Yeah there always has to be some sort of noise where ever I am
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 3:27 pm
Pssst! I have a book published on here! It's not done (not even close really) but could you lemme know what you think so far? Thanks I'd appreciate it :)
 
alanacarlene replied...
Dec. 19, 2010 at 12:44 pm
Omg! Ok yeah totally! I'll check it out now!
 
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