Secrets

November 25, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


Sun glaring down upon my face
The sand pulsing as the crashing waves
Collide with the ground and wash up to my feet
The cold water making me curl my toes
I move up the beach, walking ever so slowly
Taking everything in and leaving nothing behind
My skin soaking it all up, just like a dry sponge
The girl next to me takes my hand in hers
And then I realize that I am so happy


The author's comments:
Named after my favorite beach on the beautiful island of Maui:)

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on Feb. 20 2011 at 6:20 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Awesome!!! hahaha:)  Maui ftw.

on Feb. 20 2011 at 6:18 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

awesome. I like the word choice. 

:)


on Jan. 15 2011 at 8:55 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

BETTER BE!!!

on Jan. 15 2011 at 2:39 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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I've only been there like 1 or 2 times. So it's still your beach

on Jan. 12 2011 at 6:44 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

NO!!! It's our beach!! You don't get to love it!!!!

on Jan. 11 2011 at 2:16 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
59 articles 2 photos 88 comments
Especially liked the beginning. I love that beach too. 




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