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Meet me on the corner of Despair Avenue,
Two blocks down from Misery Lane,
At the intersection of Depression Court and
The Boulevard of Broken Dreams.

I’ll see you then, at twelve o’ clock Sad,
Half past a quarter to Lost Hope,
Five past the Point of No Return,
And ten ‘till the Time of Death.

Three quarters of the way,
Until Death do us Part,
Then turn right, right into the Dying Heart,
But be careful, one of the roads is
Broken Beyond Repair.

When you arrive, don’t forget to
Knock ‘Em Dead on the door,
Live Like There’s No Tomorrow,
Lay your sorrows on the floor.

Lay your sorrows on my floor,
And together, the whole world we’ll explore.

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CarrieAnn13 said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 10:47 pm
Great poem!  I love the names you thought of to represent sadness, despair, etc.  Good job and keep writing!
Sweet_Deceit replied...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 11:41 am
Thanks! I'm glad you liked that part-- it was the hardest to come up with, hahaha.
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 7:14 am
This was really interesting and I enjoyed reading it!! I love all you work!! :)
-Insert_Evil_Laugh- replied...
Apr. 9, 2011 at 4:05 pm
Thanks a ton!
AlyBug said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 4:13 pm
wow depressing.... but good depresion.... :) your amazing
-Insert_Evil_Laugh- replied...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 4:53 pm

Thank you :D


I had some trouble with this one, hahaha

AmandaPanda123 said...
Jan. 31, 2011 at 5:00 pm
Creative! I enjoyed reading it!
-Insert_Evil_Laugh- replied...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 1:43 pm
Thank you! It was sort of hard coming up with parts of it ^^"
...PensiveGurl... said...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 12:14 am
huh. it's very creative... I like it! ^-^
-Insert_Evil_Laugh- replied...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 1:45 pm

Thanks! I feel like it could have been better, though...


Anyways, the feedback is appreciated :D

lostnhim said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 6:27 pm

Really good! (: Your a great writer!


MyFriendFate replied...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 8:22 am
Thanks again! :D
helpless said...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 2:31 am
omg i love this poem i think its amazing
MyFriendFate replied...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 10:00 am
Thank you! :D
helpless replied...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 4:33 pm
i love the content and how it ends leads to the true meening its awesome
MyFriendFate replied...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 8:21 am
Thanks! Yeah, I tryed to get a good ending in there :)
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