What Else A Mystery

November 20, 2010
By C.S.Jhingree GOLD, BOYNTON BEACH, Florida
C.S.Jhingree GOLD, BOYNTON BEACH, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Fear is the path to the dark side. Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering."


Visual a mystery
Olfactory
Auditory
Gustatory
Tactile

See
Metamorphic butterfly
Hatch egg
Born caterpillar
Cocoon to butterfly

Smell
Sweet mango
Scent of fresh air
Fragrant of flower

Hear
Lion’s roar
Wolf howling
Bird chirping
Flowing waterfall

Taste
Spring’s water
Bite apple
Bee’s honey

Touch
Hair grass
Climbing tree
Petting squirrel

Life’s mystery
What be expected
Use your five senses
Maybe six
ESPE
The unknown

The author's comments:
love nature

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on Dec. 13 2010 at 7:08 pm
C.S.Jhingree GOLD, BOYNTON BEACH, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Fear is the path to the dark side. Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering."

Thank you for the encouraging and critiques comments :)

torn said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 12:47 pm
keep writing..........nice........

on Dec. 11 2010 at 1:47 pm
jillianatthedisco SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"People say nothing is impossible, but I do nothing every day!" -Winnie the Pooh

This is fantastic.

Alex412 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:54 am
Alex412 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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This poem is great. I love the way this poem is made. You describe and list many different animals and what they do, and feelings. My favorite part of this poem is;

"Hear
Lion’s roar
Wolf howling
Bird chirping
Flowing waterfall."

I just love how you describe how the wolves howl, the lions roar, etc. Like I said, this poem is great but to make it better you should like add more details to the poem. Add more lines.


bill said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 8:01 am
beautiful!!!!  what a poem

KATE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 7:27 am
Excellent.  You are born a poet




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