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Metamorphic butterfly
Hatch egg
Born caterpillar
Cocoon to butterfly

Sweet mango
Scent of fresh air
Fragrant of flower

Lion’s roar
Wolf howling
Bird chirping
Flowing waterfall

Spring’s water
Bite apple
Bee’s honey

Hair grass
Climbing tree
Petting squirrel

Life’s mystery
What be expected
Use your five senses
Maybe six
The unknown

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C.S.Jhingree said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 7:08 pm
Thank you for the encouraging and critiques comments :)
torn said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 12:47 pm
keep writing..........nice........
jillianatthediscoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 11, 2010 at 1:47 pm
This is fantastic.
Alex412 said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 11:54 am

This poem is great. I love the way this poem is made. You describe and list many different animals and what they do, and feelings. My favorite part of this poem is;

Lion’s roar
Wolf howling
Bird chirping
Flowing waterfall."

I just love how you describe how the wolves howl, the lions roar, etc. Like I said, this poem is great but to make it better you should like add more details to the poem. Add more lines.

bill said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 8:01 am
beautiful!!!!  what a poem
KATE said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 7:27 am
Excellent.  You are born a poet
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