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November 20, 2010
By jennamoon SILVER, Morrow, Ohio
jennamoon SILVER, Morrow, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
to love, is to also BE loved.


when i see my reflection
i see four different reflections,
i see one full or happiness,
one of hope,
and one filled with sadness pain and loneliness, and then there's mine,
my actually reflection me, mixed up lost me waundering me,
looking for love kindness,
what am i?
what is my reflection telling me? i walk home and on my way i pick a flower
smell it
and smile,
i am who i am,
different me extraordnary

ME.



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on Dec. 10 2010 at 4:57 pm
jennamoon SILVER, Morrow, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
to love, is to also BE loved.

ok ill will try to make it longer but maybe in one of my next poems something will turn out more

on Dec. 10 2010 at 4:56 pm
jennamoon SILVER, Morrow, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
to love, is to also BE loved.

thank you so much

vnj6607 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 2:05 pm
vnj6607 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Yo

This poem reminds me of myself too. One minute I'm happy, one minute I'm sad, and the next minute I'm filled with loneliness. My favorite line is "what is my reflection telling me (l.9)?" My other favorite line is "i am who i am/different me extraordinary (l.13&14)." No one can change who they are, and it just has to be accepted. Good job.

403jaa BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:52 am
403jaa BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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I love this poem because I feel the same way about my life. The line "i am who i am,different me extraordinary Me." This line helped me to feel I am unique in my own way. Please just make the poem longer, because I felt there was way much more to say.


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