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November 20, 2010
when i see my reflection
i see four different reflections,
i see one full or happiness,
one of hope,
and one filled with sadness pain and loneliness, and then there's mine,
my actually reflection me, mixed up lost me waundering me,
looking for love kindness,
what am i?
what is my reflection telling me? i walk home and on my way i pick a flower
smell it
and smile,
i am who i am,
different me extraordnary

ME.





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jennamoon said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 4:57 pm
ok ill will try to make it longer but maybe in one of my next poems something will turn out more
 
jennamoon said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 4:56 pm
thank you so much
 
vnj6607 said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 2:05 pm
This poem reminds me of myself too. One minute I'm happy, one minute I'm sad, and the next minute I'm filled with loneliness. My favorite line is "what is my reflection telling me (l.9)?" My other favorite line is "i am who i am/different me extraordinary (l.13&14)." No one can change who they are, and it just has to be accepted. Good job.
 
403jaa said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 11:52 am
I love this poem because I feel the same way about my life. The line "i am who i am,different me extraordinary Me." This line helped me to feel I am unique in my own way. Please just make the poem longer, because I felt there was way much more to say.
 
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