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Rainbow

I’m a rainbow
each color is a personality

Sometimes only half
my rainbow shows
and I hide the rest behind
a dark cloud

My colors shine like the sun
or turn black as coal and I
want to go hide in a hole

Around my friends all my colors show
but most of the time the dark cloud is
my best friend helping me hide my
true self from others

I wish I could show more
people all my colors





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Clarebear101This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 5:12 pm
thanx :) I'll work on that!
 
cjc408 said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 12:03 pm

"Sometimes only half my rainbow shows and I hide the rest behind a dark cloud"

I like this line. I can relate to it. Some days I feel like I can't be myself around some people. If you used more similes to show how you feel then this poem would be great. 

 
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