Rainbow

November 20, 2010
By Clarebear101 PLATINUM, Bellbrook, Ohio
Clarebear101 PLATINUM, Bellbrook, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing we can do can change the past, everything we do can change the future"
"raindrops are like fairy whispers"
"life is not about finding yourself it is about creating yourself"


I’m a rainbow
each color is a personality

Sometimes only half
my rainbow shows
and I hide the rest behind
a dark cloud

My colors shine like the sun
or turn black as coal and I
want to go hide in a hole

Around my friends all my colors show
but most of the time the dark cloud is
my best friend helping me hide my
true self from others

I wish I could show more
people all my colors



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on Dec. 10 2010 at 5:12 pm
Clarebear101 PLATINUM, Bellbrook, Ohio
23 articles 31 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing we can do can change the past, everything we do can change the future"
"raindrops are like fairy whispers"
"life is not about finding yourself it is about creating yourself"

thanx :) I'll work on that!

cjc408 said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 12:03 pm
cjc408, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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"Sometimes only half my rainbow shows and I hide the rest behind a dark cloud"

I like this line. I can relate to it. Some days I feel like I can't be myself around some people. If you used more similes to show how you feel then this poem would be great. 



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