Reverie

November 21, 2010
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments

Stuck in my memory,
sweet reverie,
the things I see,
everything is bright and clear,
the flashing lights above my head,
tell me I'm not dead,
I don't know where I am,
I'm lost inside,
the shadows in my vision,
don't overwhelm or near,
everything is perfect,
there's nothing that I fear,
I smell fresh cotton,
and roses, too,
I don't know why,
but I think that I might lose,
something is pulling at my thoughts,
like a thread coming undone,
I slowly drift away,
there's nothing left for me.


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on Jul. 31 2011 at 3:23 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! :)

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 9:27 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Cool how you broke up the sentences. Nice job!

on Feb. 14 2011 at 9:27 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

This sounds like in a...hospital? Intruging, I don't have much else to say.




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