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Is there something I should know?
Nobody’s fool.
Nothing in common,
with or without you

Love is a battlefield,
guns in the sky
hit me with your best shot.
Never surrender-
boys don’t cry.

Burning heart, broken wings…
Do you really want to hurt me?
Owner of a lonely heart
things can only get better.

I want to break free
I want to know what love is
I still haven’t found what I’m looking for-
Heaven knows I’m miserable now.
Goodbye.





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LadyRose said...
Jul. 1, 2012 at 1:01 pm
This is very original! I love the fact you incorperated older songs into your work, that went along with the message you were trying to put across. Keep up the good work!
 
emidances96 said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 6:31 pm
could you please tell me what song goes with what line?? thnx!!
 
Ellawind replied...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 7:58 pm

Is there something I should know? by Duran Duran

Nobody’s Fool by Kenny Loggins

Nothing In Common by The Thompson Twins

With Or Without You by U2

 

Love Is A Battlefield by Pat Benatar

Guns In The Sky by INXS

Hit Me With Your Best Shot by Pat Benatar

Never Surrender by Corey Hart

Boys Don't Cry by The Cure

 

Burning Heart by Survivor, Broken Wings by Mr. Mister

Do You Really Want To Hurt Me by ... (more »)

 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 29, 2010 at 5:17 pm
original!! i personally never would have thought of it!!! nicely put together aswel!!! i love it!!
 
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