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death by life

November 20, 2010
By __kat__ BRONZE, Emmett, Michigan
__kat__ BRONZE, Emmett, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"perfection cannot exist without flaw which means perfect cannot exist at all" and "art isnt about exact lines and objects. its about feelings and perceptive"


in the days of my life
i find myself waiting
waiting, waiting, waiting
for something
anything
i draw for the light
and write for the darkness
to many things happen
and so i find myself
slipping
slipping, slipping, slipping
into darkness, into death
finally my heart stops beating
and i stop breathing



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on Dec. 8 2010 at 3:52 pm
This is really good only thing i would say is use words with description described how lonely your heart is, how you ache for someone to break through the barriers that have been set up without the consent of the one person i surrounds.  That's all that i can suggest....keep on writing your poetry it is really good i can relate to everything.  Please don't take this negatively it is a positive comment just with a few words of wisdom i suppose.  You can take them or you can leave them it is up to you but never stop expressing yourself.  Thanks!!!

on Dec. 8 2010 at 1:45 pm
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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Lonely night... this is how I feel... I can't handle the silence... Your poem is amazing =]

on Dec. 8 2010 at 1:12 pm
lovelifelollypops BRONZE, Northampton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Forever and almost always

i can really relate to this its amazing....great stuff :)

on Dec. 8 2010 at 11:45 am
Hidden1234 SILVER, Northeast, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Everytime i see you a burst apart and scatter the sky with my blazing heart"

*fictional

 


on Dec. 8 2010 at 11:44 am
Hidden1234 SILVER, Northeast, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Everytime i see you a burst apart and scatter the sky with my blazing heart"

this is an amazing poem =) i love the meaning and can relate as well. If this is about you and not ficyional to you, i hope you can find the light that will make you happy and love life. =) good luck