November 17, 2010
By mandss22193 BRONZE, Huntington, West Virginia
mandss22193 BRONZE, Huntington, West Virginia
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This place I'm in,
there's something not right.
It keeps pulling me back,
when I'm trying to take flight.

This place I'm in,
has an undying force.
Rushing, rampant winds,
a tornado at course.

This place I'm in,
it scares me sometimes.
This whirlwind of chaos,
plays with my mind.

This place I'm in,
I'm going to get out.
Yes, I'll forever fight
this whirpool of doubt.

The author's comments:
This poem is inspired by my hometown. I've seen so many people fall into the "whirlpool of doubt". If you don't try your hardest, and stay out of bad situations, this place will suck you in. You'll be here forever in this city that is devoid of culture and life.

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