Her Thoughts

November 17, 2010
By Biancamp BRONZE, Melrose, Massachusetts
Biancamp BRONZE, Melrose, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"you are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think." Winnie the Pooh

Lost in thought she sits and stares
In no direction
Just so many cares
Dreaming of sunsets
Oceans of blue
Dreaming of melodies cheerful and new
Disregards all else just sits by herself
Wanders off into space
The look on her face
Is so silent and calming
The thought in her eyes
Just sits and relaxes
Dreams of surprise
When someone calls she never replies
Because when she’s in her own world
Can’t hear the loudest cries
She can’t be distracted
No not moved just one bit
Because the thoughts that she’s thinking
Always seem to fit
People try and they try
But they never can win
It’s as if taking a thought away
Could be a sin

The author's comments:
This is a poem I wrote when I was deep in reflection and thoughts on myself. I often do this and wanted to convey it into a poem. Its my time to reflect and think about what direction I am going in.

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This article has 2 comments.

Brian said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 8:56 am
This is a very thoughtful poem.  You have great insight.

Stephanie said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 8:55 am
Sometimes I feel like that too.  Thanks for putting it into words.


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