I Want Them Back

November 17, 2010
you exhaust me
leave me bare
and dry
so I can't see
the loves I used to have
the other ones
you thief
I want them back

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ksd603 said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 2:27 pm
This was short but catchy. Admittedly, I was a little skeptical at the title, however, once I read the poem, I loved it. Needless to say, my favorite lines of the poem were the last four: "..the loves I used to have/ the other ones/ you thief/ I want them back". Excellent job and I hope you continue to write poetry because you are superb at it. Marvelous.
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