Not Dreaming

November 17, 2010
By TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
TheArchitect ELITE, Madison, Wisconsin
227 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Anything said by Mr. T
- Ill be in my bunk
- Im so clever that half the time I don't even understand what I'm saying


you are asleep now
somewhere
far away from me
and
I know
when you dream
it is not of me
I can't help hoping
just a little bit
that they might be
but I am kidding myself,
really
you have never cared that much
or at least
you pretended not to


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on Dec. 7 2010 at 11:24 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

(: this made my day. great job!

on Dec. 7 2010 at 9:04 am
shellbelle524 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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I think that more imagery would've painted a more vivid picture for me. Other than that, good job ! "you have never cared that much/or at least/you pretended not to"(l.13-15) were my favorite and most empathized. 

on Dec. 7 2010 at 9:03 am
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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Before I go to sleep I think of a person and hope to dream about them but I never do. Oh well... somedays I wonder if anyone dreams about me.. well I loved your poem =]

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on Dec. 6 2010 at 8:05 pm
CgWillis GOLD, Racine, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"The problem is not the problem, the problem is your attitude about the problem. Got that?" --Coach Brevin.

"What you do speaks so loudly that I cannot hear what you say." --Ralph Waldo Emerson

This expresses what Im feeling perfectly!  Good job on a great poem!

on Dec. 6 2010 at 6:47 pm
Cuppie.Cake DIAMOND,
80 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I\'m Not Afraid To Take A Stand, Everybody Come Take My Hand.\"
~Eminem~
\"I Just Want You To Know, That You Deserve The Best, You\'re Beautiful.\"
~Lil\' Wayne~
\"Just keep swimming, just keep swimming. What do we do...we swim swim swim.\"
~Finding No~

I think everyone has felt that way at least once in their life. Teens feel like that most of the time tho...

on Dec. 6 2010 at 4:27 pm
ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Omnia vincit amor et nos cedamus amori- Love conquers all let us yield to love
Sweat Dries, Blood Clots, Bones Heal, Suck it up and dance!
If they give you ruled paper, write the other way

I loved this so much!!! It seems like exactly what i think... Please check out my work if you get a chance....


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