To That Girl

By , Fremont, CA
You snatch my voice away.
You invade my thoughts and scramble them.
You thrust fear into me.
With trepidation, I address you. I pause, for I forget what I wanted to say.
And I get nervous, stripped of my mental armor I thought rather strong.
Like a theif, I slink away.





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Sockmonkeys said...
Dec. 19, 2010 at 10:26 am
That's beutiful. :)
 
i.ll_be_fine_899 said...
Dec. 18, 2010 at 10:10 am
awwww, how sweet ^^ that was wonderfully written!! good jobb
 
TaleGate said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 10:00 pm
Wow! This is really cool! I love the power in this piece and how you just cut to the bone. Simple, sweet, and powerful all in one poem. Keep writing! :3
 
teenpoet8 said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 5:05 pm
are you a guy who wrote this to a girl???  omg thats so sweet!
 
ShawtyThiqq said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 12:47 pm
Loved the poem. It was quite relaxing to read
 
secret_author replied...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 12:49 pm
such a lovely poem
 
percussionnerd1200 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 11:33 am
I quite enjoyed this (: it's nice to see it from a different point of view.
 
inheavenshands This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 9:44 pm
Nice job! :) Just use some spell check and it will be perfecto!
 
tedster replied...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 9:49 pm
thanks. i'll definitely do that
 
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