To That Girl

November 18, 2010
By Anonymous

You snatch my voice away.
You invade my thoughts and scramble them.
You thrust fear into me.
With trepidation, I address you. I pause, for I forget what I wanted to say.
And I get nervous, stripped of my mental armor I thought rather strong.
Like a theif, I slink away.

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This article has 9 comments.

Mkla-H8n GOLD said...
on Dec. 19 2010 at 10:26 am
Mkla-H8n GOLD, Chilhowie, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
" Friends are temporary, but Sisters are forever" By me.Its something about us being sisters that keep us as friends.
"Parenta will love you no matter what!" I LOVE my parents and I know they LOVE me too! :)

That's beutiful. :)

on Dec. 18 2010 at 10:10 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awwww, how sweet ^^ that was wonderfully written!! good jobb

TaleGate GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2010 at 10:00 pm
TaleGate GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
10 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you want the rainbow, you must put up with the rain."

Wow! This is really cool! I love the power in this piece and how you just cut to the bone. Simple, sweet, and powerful all in one poem. Keep writing! :3

teenpoet8 said...
on Dec. 17 2010 at 5:05 pm
are you a guy who wrote this to a girl???  omg thats so sweet!

on Dec. 17 2010 at 12:49 pm
secret_author BRONZE, A City, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
“I dont think having a My Chemical Romance action figure will make a kid start his own band, I like to think it will make him save children from a burning building.”

“I'm not psycho...I just like psychotic things.”

“If you don't go to highschool you will definitely go to jail.”

such a lovely poem

ShawtyThiqq said...
on Dec. 17 2010 at 12:47 pm
Loved the poem. It was quite relaxing to read

on Dec. 17 2010 at 11:33 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
72 articles 3 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

I quite enjoyed this (: it's nice to see it from a different point of view.

tedster SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2010 at 9:49 pm
tedster SILVER, Fremont, California
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Speak softly and carry a big stick-Theodore Roosevelt

thanks. i'll definitely do that

on Dec. 16 2010 at 9:44 pm
inheavenshands BRONZE, Kaysville, Utah
4 articles 10 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I dream a lot. I do more painting when I'm not painting. It's in the subconscious.
::: Andrew Wyeth :::

Nice job! :) Just use some spell check and it will be perfecto!


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