Follow It

November 18, 2010
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For so long I ran through darkness
Stumbling to find a way
Any way that would lead me out
Of the never ending tunnel of life
For so long I was lost
In a forest of black
A land of nothing
A world of blankness
And then for so long I stood still
Accepting there was no way out
Accepting that I would spend eternity
Floating though empty space
And then
A light
Shone on me
A light broke through the darkness
Through the forest
Through the empty space
And I followed it
Followed it
Followed it
With all the strength I didn't have
I pushed
My way through
To follow the light
Must follow the light
Had to follow the light
Follow the light
Follow it
With the last bit of energy I had
I ripped down the last of the vines
Pushed aside the black emptiness
And there
At the end of the light
Was you.

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Keirsten K. said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 11:40 am

i think that this poem is so good and i know that someone very special read this and cried. i know that if someone wrote a poem like this for me them i would. Good job and dont stop writing :)


ceb105 said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 9:17 am
I like the imagery in this poem. It shows different pictures, but all with the same feel. I also like the repetition. You could use more descriptive adjectives to better bring out the imagery. I can feel the pain in this poem, and I like that I can relate to many of the feelings.
mwahxandxmwa said...
Dec. 5, 2010 at 6:41 pm

This is very picturesque. It has an immense depth and flow to it which is syunning. Amazing!! 5 out of 5 stars. Mwah :D

If you get a chance could you please check out some of my work? Mwah :D

dolphin13 said...
Dec. 5, 2010 at 11:09 am

I really liked this. It had a great picture. Good Job. Keep up the good work.


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