I Realized

November 14, 2010
By MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
17 articles 10 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane


I woke up this morning and realized,
That the sun wasn’t shining as bright.
The birds weren’t singing as pretty,
And something didn’t feel right.

I woke up this morning and realized,
That I didn’t look forward to things anymore,
Everything felt the same,
Every window, wall, and door.

I woke up this morning and realized,
That something seemed to be gone.
Like something was just gonna bug me,
Like I had done something wrong.

I woke up this morning and realized,
How much I really need you,
I cry now just to think,
That this whole time I’ve just kinda used you.

I woke up this morning and realized,
I don’t need a boy to complete me.
They will always come and go,
But a friend will never leave me.

I woke up this morning and realized,
That the meaning of life is to learn,
That every day you realize something new,
So live your life, to your own concern.


The author's comments:
This is one of my poems that I originally wrote a while ago and then typed it up and changed some stanzas so... Hope ya like it :P

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Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:14 am
Phoenixx GOLD, Toronto, Other
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This, is, AMAZING! :D

I love how just about anyone can relate to something like this, its also written very! Captures feeling and everything! :)


MRose911 GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2010 at 11:04 pm
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
17 articles 10 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

Thanks! :)

MRose911 GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2010 at 11:03 pm
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
17 articles 10 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

It's actually written in a day after day form. Like one morning i woke and realized... the next morning, etc. Glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting!

on Dec. 9 2010 at 10:10 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Wow, awesome poem!  I can completely understand its feelings, having experienced them before.  Keep writing, this is very clever and so true.  :D

-Rose


on Dec. 8 2010 at 12:07 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

I really like the fifth stanza, about how you don't need a boy to complete you :) But I was confused in the beginning a bit. In the first stanza you said something didn't feel right, and in the second stanza, you said that everything felt the same. Did you mean everything physically in the second one, and mentally or emotionally in the first?

Great job with this!

-Angel



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