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The Memory

The memory, burning
In fire and
Turning into ashes
And left to disappear in rage

The memory, lost
By meaning of losing
Or by purpose
Lost to never come back

The memory, gone
Gone in a blink of an eye
Like life which never come back



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MoriahR. said...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 1:32 am:
Wow!  I loved this very much!  I think it descirbes well what its like to lose a memory!
 
JonniK replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 1:41 am :
Thank you very much. :)       I did not know it was that good. Thanks for liking it Thank you again
 
JonniK replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 1:42 am :
By the way you are the one who wrote "Daddy's womb" right? I loved yours too. I just loved it.
 
MoriahR. replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 11:09 am :
Ah!  No I didn't write "Daddy's womb"  Ha!  I wish I did!  I thought that one was really good too!  I favorited it!
 
JonniK replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 5:32 pm :
Oh sorry for that. Then what kind of things did you write?
 
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JonniK said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 6:53 pm:
Hello everyone this is Johnny, the author of "The memory" Thanks for the ones who tend to like the peom. Thank you again. If you got any questions or concerns about the poem, let me know.
 
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