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Darkness

Darkness is a hole were there is no opening or a cell with no light or warmth darkness is a tunnel that has no light at the other side it goes on and on darkness is a state of mind were anything can happen it will let your mind wander darkness is the humans worst fear





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mwahxandxmwa said...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 7:35 pm
Th is poem has an extreme depth to it. It conveys your emotions and thoughts well. Well, i can not agree with you more it is my worst fear. Extremely brilliant. Mwah :D
 
Braids said...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 2:57 pm
this poem is fantastic, it really shows me what darkness means to you
 
CountryGothic said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 1:08 pm
Interesting...I like how you have no punctuation seperating each new line, it makes the writing itself like the darkness.
 
Soccerguy replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 12:08 am
Thank you 
 
LaShay_25 said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 9:10 am
This is a great poem, I'm afraid of the silence and being alone cause then I think to much. How did you come up with this??
 
Soccerguy replied...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 12:06 am
i was going through a tough period of my life at the time, it is actually the first poem i wrote sence i became a teen, it just kinda came to me though.
 
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