Darkness

December 1, 2010
By Soccerguy SILVER, Radford, Virginia
Soccerguy SILVER, Radford, Virginia
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Darkness is a hole were there is no opening or a cell with no light or warmth darkness is a tunnel that has no light at the other side it goes on and on darkness is a state of mind were anything can happen it will let your mind wander darkness is the humans worst fear


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on Dec. 4 2010 at 7:35 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Silence is golden...duct tape is silver" - a random T-shirt

Th is poem has an extreme depth to it. It conveys your emotions and thoughts well. Well, i can not agree with you more it is my worst fear. Extremely brilliant. Mwah :D

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on Dec. 4 2010 at 2:57 pm
Braids SILVER, Gibsonton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
its not all about the mountain, but to the ant running across your shoe

this poem is fantastic, it really shows me what darkness means to you

on Dec. 4 2010 at 12:08 am
Soccerguy SILVER, Radford, Virginia
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Thank you 

on Dec. 4 2010 at 12:06 am
Soccerguy SILVER, Radford, Virginia
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i was going through a tough period of my life at the time, it is actually the first poem i wrote sence i became a teen, it just kinda came to me though.

on Dec. 3 2010 at 1:08 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Interesting...I like how you have no punctuation seperating each new line, it makes the writing itself like the darkness.

on Dec. 3 2010 at 9:10 am
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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This is a great poem, I'm afraid of the silence and being alone cause then I think to much. How did you come up with this??




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