I wanna write a poem

I wanna write a poem
All cool and metaphorical
About the sky and how its blue…
But isn’t that sort of, rhetorical?
I wanna write a poem
One that makes you think
About my motivations
And why I chose black ink.
I wanna write a poem
About my path in life
Just why I made my choices
And what has caused me strife
I wanna write a peom
But I guess I’m already done
So tell me was it metaphorical
Or simply out of fun





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Aderes18 said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 7:51 pm

I really like this poem. :)

It's funny and whimsical! 

 
MRose911 said...
Dec. 1, 2010 at 10:24 pm
This is so creative!!! :) love it! :P
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 1, 2010 at 1:56 pm
I wish this stupid comment thing would work .oh what do you know? it worked. i forgot what i was gonna say but anyway, i really liked this captain. do your dance.
 
kmarie14 replied...
Dec. 1, 2010 at 9:09 pm
ha ha:) thanks glad ya liked it
 
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