A Forest In Winter

November 12, 2010
By musiclover2396 SILVER, Manassas, Virginia
musiclover2396 SILVER, Manassas, Virginia
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Twilight falls,
The sky turns as black as stone
Snow gently, delicately drifts like falling rose petals
resting on the stiff arms of the trees,
spreading out ready to catch the first sign of dawn
Warming fire dances into the clouds like a rising spirit eagerly reaching for the sky
Icicles as exquisite as the most ostentatious diamond slowly, patiently form


The darkest point, midnight
sheets upon sheets blanket the town frozen in time
Quiet, as if the world is in a state of permanet silence
Fires still ablaze cast a faint shadow accross the town
Sleeping hearts are beating crystals, cold and silent


Morning,
Colors splatter the sky,
they're natural canvas
The darkness slowly ominously creeps away in a foreboding retreat,
waiting to once again overpower the blazing sun
Beaming smiles of the towns children resemble something of a glimmer.
The graze of colors build, the atmosphere a rainbow itself.


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on Dec. 11 2010 at 9:53 pm
Oh really..ok i give you a hint HIGH KICK!!!! LMAO

on Dec. 11 2010 at 2:57 pm

l its erika i can tell by the user name lol

-<3 Gissela


on Dec. 10 2010 at 3:05 pm
musiclover2396 SILVER, Manassas, Virginia
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hmmm i have absolutely no clue who this could be lol =P

on Dec. 10 2010 at 2:53 pm
Guess Who?! lol I ADORE this poem <3!!! love ya court!!

MoHo365 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 10:08 pm
naaaa uhhhh i knew u could write like that that what happens when someone *cough*  dropps there paper

on Dec. 9 2010 at 8:16 pm
musiclover2396 SILVER, Manassas, Virginia
5 articles 1 photo 7 comments
=) well u didnt know your sister  could write like that, could you?

on Dec. 9 2010 at 8:13 pm
musiclover2396 SILVER, Manassas, Virginia
5 articles 1 photo 7 comments
=) it was my little secret hahahah =P

on Dec. 9 2010 at 8:12 pm
musiclover2396 SILVER, Manassas, Virginia
5 articles 1 photo 7 comments
thanks =) hopefully they'll post some more of the stuff i submitted!

on Dec. 9 2010 at 8:10 pm
Ommg(: I love it, that was wonderfull! Continue to do more<3

mychem541 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 6:55 pm
this is amazing i felt it(:

MeThe Guy said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 6:44 pm
Nice Poetry :)

MoHo360 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 6:34 pm
My sister wrote that ;)

on Dec. 9 2010 at 6:33 pm
I LOVE IT,HOW COME U NEVER TOLD ME YOU WERE TALENTED >:O . O well........... Love yah -Taco <3

Smiles123 said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 4:52 pm
Wow this is ahmazing your really talented:D

on Dec. 9 2010 at 3:00 pm
musiclover2396 SILVER, Manassas, Virginia
5 articles 1 photo 7 comments
thank you! =)

lifemusic71 said...
on Dec. 8 2010 at 8:01 pm
thats amazing!!!




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