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A Forest In Winter

Twilight falls,
The sky turns as black as stone
Snow gently, delicately drifts like falling rose petals
resting on the stiff arms of the trees,
spreading out ready to catch the first sign of dawn
Warming fire dances into the clouds like a rising spirit eagerly reaching for the sky
Icicles as exquisite as the most ostentatious diamond slowly, patiently form


The darkest point, midnight
sheets upon sheets blanket the town frozen in time
Quiet, as if the world is in a state of permanet silence
Fires still ablaze cast a faint shadow accross the town
Sleeping hearts are beating crystals, cold and silent


Morning,
Colors splatter the sky,
they're natural canvas
The darkness slowly ominously creeps away in a foreboding retreat,
waiting to once again overpower the blazing sun
Beaming smiles of the towns children resemble something of a glimmer.
The graze of colors build, the atmosphere a rainbow itself.




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Mrs.AndySix1320 said...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 2:53 pm:
Guess Who?! lol I ADORE this poem <3!!! love ya court!!
 
musiclover2396 replied...
Dec. 10, 2010 at 3:05 pm :
hmmm i have absolutely no clue who this could be lol =P
 
Mrs.AndySix1320 replied...
Dec. 11, 2010 at 9:53 pm :
Oh really..ok i give you a hint HIGH KICK!!!! LMAO
 
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musiclover2396 said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 8:12 pm:
thanks =) hopefully they'll post some more of the stuff i submitted!
 
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Estrella/aylen said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 8:10 pm:
Ommg(: I love it, that was wonderfull! Continue to do more<3
 
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mychem541 said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 6:55 pm:
this is amazing i felt it(:
 
TacoTheUnicorn replied...
Dec. 11, 2010 at 2:57 pm :

l its erika i can tell by the user name lol

-<3 Gissela

 
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MeThe Guy said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 6:44 pm:
Nice Poetry :)
 
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MoHo360 said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 6:34 pm:
My sister wrote that ;)
 
musiclover2396 replied...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 8:16 pm :
=) well u didnt know your sister  could write like that, could you?
 
MoHo365 replied...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 10:08 pm :
naaaa uhhhh i knew u could write like that that what happens when someone *cough*  dropps there paper
 
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Smiles123 said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 4:52 pm:
Wow this is ahmazing your really talented:D
 
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lifemusic71 said...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 8:01 pm:
thats amazing!!!
 
musiclover2396 replied...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 3:00 pm :
thank you! =)
 
TacoTheUnicorn replied...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 6:33 pm :
I LOVE IT,HOW COME U NEVER TOLD ME YOU WERE TALENTED >:O . O well........... Love yah -Taco <3
 
musiclover2396 replied...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 8:13 pm :
=) it was my little secret hahahah =P
 
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