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Peace of Mind

November 12, 2010
By Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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Please dont leave me this way
There's so much to say
And I didnt get to catch your name
Why are you leaving me all alone
With no one to call my own
Why cant you try to forget what happen in the past
And look ahead and see whats in store
I drew the line
And I hope you find
A Peace of Mind
Please dont walk away
Now I feel some type of way
Dont you know the truth
About me and you
I want you to give "Us" one more try
Before I die inside
I know I cant change the unchangeable
When it comes to you I know
I know I can try
When I was falling
You were a lending hand
When I was falling
You were the ladder who pick up
I want you to give "Us" a try
And I hope you find
A Peace of Mind



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on Feb. 8 2011 at 6:21 pm
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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Its alright.

S M Wells said...
on Feb. 8 2011 at 8:53 am
In that case I'll guess so to. If that's OK.

on Feb. 7 2011 at 8:50 pm
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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Okay, thats okay........I guess

S M Wells said...
on Feb. 7 2011 at 8:22 am
You can't really make sure. Because as far as you know I could be lying. Although I trust I'm not.

on Feb. 6 2011 at 9:53 pm
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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Im not. I just making sure that you were laughing.

S M Wells said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 1:10 pm
That is because I was unawear you responded. And yes I was laughing. But don't laugh yourself to death.

on Feb. 4 2011 at 10:11 am
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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You didnt write back on this one

on Jan. 12 2011 at 1:27 pm
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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Where you really laughing, because if you were, imma laugh myself to death

S M Wells said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 8:31 pm
You are such a laugh!

on Jan. 11 2011 at 8:17 pm
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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Thanks. idk for what either, but thanks anyway.

S M Wells said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 12:56 pm
Your welcom. I'm not sure what for...but your welcom anyway.

on Jan. 7 2011 at 10:52 am
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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okay, thanks

S M Wells said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 9:07 am
That's good...I think. I mean it's not good you had your feeling hurt,but good you aren't crushed by it.

on Jan. 4 2011 at 9:06 pm
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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I had my feelings hurt before, I would've took it anyway.

S M Wells said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 7:46 pm
I glad to hear it. I don't like hurting peoples feelings and I wasn't sure but what I might have.

on Dec. 20 2010 at 6:20 pm
Somone Grier SILVER, Paterson, New Jersey
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I understand

on Dec. 10 2010 at 11:40 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Actualy. I had read this one and hadn't noticed it was yours. I don't realy know what to make of it. It's not nessesairily that I don't think it's good. I just have been reading to many poems on this subject of late. And my mind has tired of opinions on it.