November 12, 2010
By XiaGaiana BRONZE, New Orleans, Louisiana
XiaGaiana BRONZE, New Orleans, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Anything is possible if you believe...
He who fails to plan, plans to fail.
All hard work brings a profit, but mere talk leads only to poverty.

Slipping into a coma
Too young to come up
Born and raised in the subs
Now her daughter won’t know luck
Crash course in life
But she didn’t have the time and
All she really cared about was
Shoes, cars and shopping
And being proud she didn’t have time
For partying and club hopping
But when it came the time to love someone
She chose herself
Fell in love with the money
Of a man with lots of wealth
Did anything he said for that maxed out plastic strip…
The bruises didn’t matter
She said darn the busted lip
The Gucci and Prada were worth it
All she needed to do was stay fit
A few months later she got a little lump
Diets galore and she still saw a bump
Next thing you know she was on the road
Driving around looking for somewhere to go
S road gave her the blues
Then the doctor in the room gave her the news
She was already gone despite the fuse
@ 1:45 PM she saw the light
The umbilical cord cut
Any mothers delight
So peaceful and beautiful she lay
As if she was really tired that day
They patted and patted their hearts away
CPR trying to get her to stay
But she’d never wake up anyway…

The author's comments:
I think it'll come off as a kinda song or rap but you just came out one day at school and i wanted to share it with you guys.

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