Yes Sir

November 10, 2010
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Give me your hand
Yes Sir
Give me your eyes
Yes Sir
Give me those dusty bones that make you hurt inside
Yes Sir

Give me your pains
Yes Sir
Give me your life
Yes Sir
Give me back the flame
Yes Sir
So I may rid your heart of strife

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Sarah R. said...
Dec. 18, 2010 at 11:37 pm
I like the word choice, I like how on your comments you didn't say what its about leaving it open for people to take their own way. :) Its good I like it and the message it sends (for me anyway)
Leann13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 12:27 pm
thank you:)
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