Yes Sir

November 10, 2010
By Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
16 articles 4 photos 112 comments

Give me your hand
Yes Sir
Give me your eyes
Yes Sir
Give me those dusty bones that make you hurt inside
Yes Sir

Give me your pains
Yes Sir
Give me your life
Yes Sir
Give me back the flame
Yes Sir
So I may rid your heart of strife


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Leann14 GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 12:27 pm
Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
16 articles 4 photos 112 comments
thank you:)

on Dec. 18 2010 at 11:37 pm
Donttrust BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
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I like the word choice, I like how on your comments you didn't say what its about leaving it open for people to take their own way. :) Its good I like it and the message it sends (for me anyway)




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