November 10, 2010
By Mr.Glass SILVER, Burlington, New Jersey
Mr.Glass SILVER, Burlington, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"It's not what they call you, it's what you answer to."

If i had a place to go, I'd flee
because no one can live my life
everyone thinks they know me
but they don't know my pain and strife

Welcome to the world of rejection
see the weariness in your eyes
as you grow to loathe your own reflection
you don't know what else to do but cry

I know that mother loves me
the best as she can
but no matter how hard she tries
she'll never understand

i fold my hnds and pray
that i'll have an excellent day
but it's like im disappearing
because the angels never hear me

One angle might
so i'll take that opportunity
i know i'll be fine
if she'd guide me through the night

so i've packed my heart and possessions
hoping it'll be enough
and with Grandma's Angel by my side
i know i'll be all right

as i run vigorous and aimlessly through the night

The author's comments:
I wrote it because i was feeling down.

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This article has 6 comments.

ZeldaEve GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2010 at 6:07 pm
ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
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This poem is very good. It flows nicely. I hope you keep writing poems that are as good as this.

on Nov. 29 2010 at 12:10 pm
TheSpiritOfMe GOLD, Fort Waynee, Indiana
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This is me... I wish i could put the way I'm feeling like this...

ZeldaMagix said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 10:34 pm
Oh my gosh i out right love this its awesome

miamor BRONZE said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 4:49 pm
miamor BRONZE, Combined Locks, Wisconsin
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oh my goodness. i love this! this is amazing 

on Nov. 25 2010 at 4:35 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

This is a beautiful poem, and i was feeling the same earlier today. no one can ever really know another person. thank you for writing this :)

on Nov. 24 2010 at 4:39 pm
MysteriouslyBeautiful BRONZE, Severn, Maryland
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Its Beautiful.. Very Touching


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