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The rain comes from the sky above.

The grass comes from beneath the ground.

The friends are sent from heaven above.

The tears come from inside your pain.

The pain comes from the core of your heart.

The stress comes from the people you care about.

The thoughts come from the imagintation of yourself.

The smile comes from the warmth of others.

The frown comes from those who just don't understand your life.

The words come from my mouth

which comes from my heart

which comes from my soul

which comes from my spirit

which comes from my enternal holy self

which is me,myself,and I.



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silence-is-loud said...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 7:43 pm:
this is very creative! nicee worrkkk
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 30, 2010 at 10:07 am :

thanks much

 

 
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Jule92xc said...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 6:48 pm:
niceeeee. I really like the ending =] check out some of my work please?
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 8:11 pm :
thanks much sure ill check yours out
 
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zhlen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 10:15 am:

i really lyk it cept for he ending

 dont think it was as good...

anyways keep up the good work

 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 5:33 pm :
wow okay ......
 
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Lay17 said...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 4:16 pm:

Touching poem

can you check out some of  my work?

 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 5:32 pm :
suuuuureeeeee thanks
 
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trblue said...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 10:14 am:
i like your poem so much that i will put in my book.
 
Ryalynn replied...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 10:22 am :
wwwwwwwwwwooooooooowwwwwww okay thanks much
 
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