first snow

November 8, 2010
i can hear the wind, it's howling outside my window
my knees are damp in spots where i fell outside
as if i fell to my knees to pray to the cold skies
my insides cold and i breathe frost into my lungs
maybe if i find someone who wants to kiss me
they can defrost me from the outside in

or something like that

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Gigi1 said...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 3:43 pm
I kind of feel like that sometimes. I fell cold and alone. This Poem is great. Seriously, GREAT!
AnnieRachel replied...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 11:29 pm
thank you, so very much.
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