first snow

November 8, 2010
By AnnieRachel SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
AnnieRachel SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
6 articles 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything was beautiful and nothing hurt."


i can hear the wind, it's howling outside my window
my knees are damp in spots where i fell outside
as if i fell to my knees to pray to the cold skies
my insides cold and i breathe frost into my lungs
maybe if i find someone who wants to kiss me
they can defrost me from the outside in

or something like that


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on Nov. 27 2010 at 11:29 pm
AnnieRachel SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"everything was beautiful and nothing hurt."

thank you, so very much.

Gigi1 SILVER said...
on Nov. 24 2010 at 3:43 pm
Gigi1 SILVER, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"the mind is like a parashute, it only functions when it's open."

I kind of feel like that sometimes. I fell cold and alone. This Poem is great. Seriously, GREAT!


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