Kuraitani

November 6, 2010
By Pia_HainzCiavelli SILVER, St.James, Other
Pia_HainzCiavelli SILVER, St.James, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Such is liife :)


Tears of blood roll down my cheeks
They stunt my breathing
I should have died in my sleep.
Wondering what I should do to cause you pain
But my own joy returns when your happiness strays.
I laugh boldly
While you’re slowly dying.
It may seem cruel
But I’ve always been heartless
My soul has already departed
It’s damaged severely
So is my heart
But once your agony sets in
I’ll pick up the parts



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on Aug. 29 2011 at 2:25 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

this was really good! creepy! But really good! It was very strong!!! Great job! :)(:

dancestar GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 9:04 am
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

do u mind checking out some of my work...like Girl Next Door, Dear Dad ,and my three new poems tht are pending publishing called "My Angel" "Alone" and "Free!!" they should be posted soon...thanks!

on Aug. 25 2011 at 9:06 pm
Pia_HainzCiavelli SILVER, St.James, Other
5 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
Such is liife :)

Thanks ! I appreciate it  !

dancestar GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 4:15 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

that was really good...amazing and eerie...great job!

on Aug. 20 2011 at 8:56 pm
Pia_HainzCiavelli SILVER, St.James, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Such is liife :)

Well i had recently read the book "Memoirs of a Geisha" and it shows that Kuraitani means'valley of darkness' in Japanese.

Thank you and please comment on the rest of my stuff ; i've read some f yours and its absolutely wonderful. Thanksss

                     - Pia V. Hainz 


on Aug. 17 2011 at 12:45 pm
Amsterdamsel DIAMOND, Henderson , Nevada
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wow that's very deep. what is the title?

 



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