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Tears of blood roll down my cheeks
They stunt my breathing
I should have died in my sleep.
Wondering what I should do to cause you pain
But my own joy returns when your happiness strays.
I laugh boldly
While you’re slowly dying.
It may seem cruel
But I’ve always been heartless
My soul has already departed
It’s damaged severely
So is my heart
But once your agony sets in
I’ll pick up the parts




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jellotinisjiggly24This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 2:25 pm:
this was really good! creepy! But really good! It was very strong!!! Great job! :)(:
 
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dancestar said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 4:15 pm:
that was really good...amazing and eerie...great job!
 
Pia_HainzCiavelli replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 9:06 pm :
Thanks ! I appreciate it  !
 
dancestar replied...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 9:04 am :
do u mind checking out some of my work...like Girl Next Door, Dear Dad ,and my three new poems tht are pending publishing called "My Angel" "Alone" and "Free!!" they should be posted soon...thanks!
 
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MeaghanSeesStars This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 12:45 pm:

wow that's very deep. what is the title?

 

 
Pia_HainzCiavelli replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 8:56 pm :

Well i had recently read the book "Memoirs of a Geisha" and it shows that Kuraitani means'valley of darkness' in Japanese.

Thank you and please comment on the rest of my stuff ; i've read some f yours and its absolutely wonderful. Thanksss

                     - Pia V. Hainz 

 
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