My Heart

November 6, 2010
By Ninz59 SILVER, Orland Park, Illinois
Ninz59 SILVER, Orland Park, Illinois
5 articles 17 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love conquers all"


Broken
Is a perfect description of what I feel
The emptiness
It’s surreal
The pain
Seeping through the cracks in my heart
Pulling on each side
I’m being ripped apart
But I can do nothing at all
Every time I grab onto the rope of life
I fall
The tears cascade my face
I bawl
The sun sets
& what do I feel?
Regret
My destiny is already set
But you saving me from this ache?
One hundred percent NO is what I bet
I can feel my heart pumping through my chest
Maybe, just maybe God is putting me through this test
To see If I can survive such a problem
But obviously I can’t because cant everyone see?
My heart is crushed into crumbs
But why does it matter anymore?
It’s all over
I’m done.


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Ninz59 SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 1:21 pm
Ninz59 SILVER, Orland Park, Illinois
5 articles 17 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love conquers all"

thank you!

dancestar GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 6:08 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

that was really good! u have very expressive writing..gud job!


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